Tuesday ~ March 03, 2010
http://www.esnips.com/doc/5aff93f1-098f-...
let me know what you think of da song above (sample) and why....10 points 4 honest opinion & feed back....thankz n God bless!!!
first of all i didnt listen to the whole thing because my computer is acting a little slow lol
*i like the beat
*i couldnt understand what you were saying....try to rap clearier
*something wasnt flowing right....either the mix of your voice or the music was either too high or not high enough and your rapping wasnt flowing well with the beat.
just a few things ive noticed :)
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Okay the song isn't all that bad. I couldn't understand what you were rapping about though. Maybe you should try slowing it down a little bit and pronouncing out your words more. Also I think that when you take those longs pauses, maybe you should add in a chorus. These suggestions will improve the song a lot better! Good Sample=)
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