Could you please rate this poster for me?
Sunday ~ March 03, 2010
the url is......
http://i435.photobucket.com/albums/qq72/...
please rate it on a scale of 1 to 10
i love the colours and the woman you've shown. t first i thought you hadn't included the breast cancer ribbon but then i noticed you had which is really important.. perhaps you could give the ribbon a touch of pink so the poster is advertising what it is about more visually, rather than verbally.
but yeah. i really love it otherwise. good work!! =]
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edit: the lines are good too. bold simple and feminine
her arm looks retarded.
other then that...
good!
and no mr. i dont want 10 points ok i actually like the picture you obviously no nothing about art and you should get out this section
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...
yeah, i would give it a 9/10,
its great, but the arm is a little funny, and the block colors don't do it for me, especially if you are trying to go Feminine, they should be more girl colours maybe..... plus im certain i have seen that kinda of outlined women before some where.... is this a original work? don't be offended, just asking.....
Wow. I just...wow. 'WTF is with the blue part?' hahaha.
I like it
It seems to me you avoided drawing the hands, and that here, if you wanted to make it look 'professional', it makes it very amateur. Drawings hands could actually be fun, and does a lot of describing and puts a lot more... quality and it gets character more, when put in drawings.
I don't see Hindi?
The line that looks like a one-shoulder shirt, that extends past the head-- that's sorta weird and seems an distraction, along with that thing it intersects with behind the lady. Is that a bed?
Really, I can't tell what's going on with the lines. Is that instead her arm behind her head?
And the way that the picture is sharpened and has many crystals of color, and gives off a Photoshop-like effect (which is hardly a mark of good craftmanship), well the little crystals of color are kinda clashing...
And although that seems to be a stylized pink ribbon, I think you can design it a bit better.
Also the way the letters 'breast cancer' seems to be-- well the letters that I guess are the un-capitalised letters, 'reast' of Breast, they gradually get bigger, and I don't think you meant to do that. Also it seems the font is unnecessarily fancy, trying for a look that makes the poster more 'artsy', than an actual poster to get the message across, of breast cancer awareness.
You did nicely but I think you have some clearing up to do.
7/10
